These are two of the poems I have had published. I get more good feedback from Breath but I prefer Faltered senses. I wrote Breath when I was 14 and Faltered when I was 19. I think you get a sense of the difference in my age when you read them. The first half of Breath seems to be much younger to me. I think my writing has grown into something a lot different than either of these but they both hold a special place in my writing past.